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- Article Writing - Lincoln's Formative
Years
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The Professional Business Writing request for this article
stemmed from the objective to educate customers about the
second Lincoln penny released in 2009. Educating customers
stimulates their interest in your products and services and
adds to your brand identity.
Example - Article Writing:
The Formative Years in Indiana - the second of
the four Lincoln cents
In 2009, the US Mint celebrates the bicentennial birth
of Abraham Lincoln, our 16th president, and the centennial of
the release of the first Lincoln penny with four new Lincoln
cents. In remembrance, each of the four pennies presents a
different reverse highlighting the geographical stages of his
life. The first reverse released on his birthday in February
showed the one room cabin in Kentucky where Lincoln spent much
of his first seven years. Now, the second penny, being released
in May, recognizes the Lincoln family’s move to Indiana in
1816, and the fourteen years a young Lincoln spent there.
This second cent’s special reverse shows a young
Lincoln sitting on a log reading a book with what may be an ax
leaning next to him. In this portrayal, he appears to be a
strong young man nearly grown to his full height of six foot
four inches. Though this reverse depicts historical aspects of
Lincoln’s life, the picture tells a potentially misleading
story.
It is true that Lincoln was adept with an ax and said,
“If I had six hours to cut wood, I would spend the first four
hours sharpening the ax.” It is also true that he spent time on
the Lincoln farm and in helping others split rails for fences.
One time, he even bartered splitting 400 rails for a woman if
she wove cloth and made pants for him.
But, here is one problem with this depiction.
Splitting rails was not done with an ax. An ax could help with
the splitting, except most of the work would be done with
wedges, a maul and a glut. Fence rails were split from a
hardwood log, generally a type of oak, six to eight feet long.
Depending on the diameter, several rails could be split from
one log. Even sharpened, an ax could not begin to split a
hardwood log.
Using a steel wedge and a maul, perhaps with a steel
head but probably wooden and also made from hardwood, Lincoln
started the first split from the larger end of the log or where
there was a natural split already in the wood. He used several
wedges, probably a mix of steel and wood, to follow and widen
the split until the end of the log. When the opening became
wide enough, a large wooden wedge called a glut - roughly
twelve inches long and four to six inches at the widest point -
would finally separate the pieces of wood. Using the same
process, these two pieces would be further split one or more
times depending on the size of the log. Looking closely at the
log on the coin, you see a glimpse of the top of a wooden wedge
embedded in the log. Perhaps that is a maul leaning beside
Lincoln, but mauls of that era were made of wood with a large
round head.
Rail splitting became important again later in his
professional life. When Lincoln was a young politician in
Illinois, John Hanks – a family friend for whom Lincoln helped
split many fence rails – brought split rails to a political
gathering as an illustration while he hailed Lincoln as a fine
man. The demonstration was a success, and “rail splitter”
became part of Lincoln’s campaign.
A second problem of this reverse is Lincoln’s
absorption in his book. It is true that his mother encouraged
him to read, and he continued to do so after her death in 1818.
It is also known that Lincoln frequently carried a book with
him. However, from a 21st century perspective, this
illustration implies he was lazy on his job. Other historical
commentary claimed Lincoln could be trusted to do his jobs
quickly and efficiently. Obviously, splitting rails was
physical work requiring occasional breaks. Maybe Lincoln did
spend those breaks reading, however he was a man of integrity,
even at a young age, and completed his jobs swiftly.
With those slight disagreements, this coin of the four
bicentennial cents should not be dismissed. It is a superb
piece of art and succinctly tells the tale of Lincoln’s life in
Indiana. He was a strong boy and a tall, muscular young man. He
was good with an ax. He did enjoy reading and learning. And, he
was a rail splitter. Within the brief picture, the artist’s
remarkable talent provided a great deal of information in the
small space allotted on the back of a penny.
This Indiana – The Formative Years coin is a great
addition to the four coin set and will be an excellent reminder
of Lincoln’s dedication to learning and to growing as a man.
The US Mint schedule shows the release date for this second
coin as May 14, 2009.
Remember to order your Certified Rolls and Mint State
graded 65 and higher versions of this coin. You won’t be
disappointed!
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